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衷心感谢英语老师的帮助英语作文范文如下：

Dear Jim,

尊敬的吉姆老师:您好！

How are you today?Thank you for your help,I am sure my English writing ability better than before,and I am interested in it now.

非常感谢您的帮助。现在我觉得我的英语写作水平比以前有了明显提高，而且越来越觉得英语写作非常有意思了。

When I read your comments every night,I would say thank you in my heart because your comments were perfect,and I always found the loses in every composition,which made me surprise and thank.

每天晚上，我都会看您给我写的评语。我想发自内心的对您说声谢谢，因为您的批改太精彩了，使我总能认识到自己写作上的失误和不足。

My previous English teacher was not careful for me, so I did not want to talk with him.Maybe it was my fault,in total, my English write ability is very bad.

连我以前的老师都不会这样细心批改，这也许是因为我的写作水平很糟。

Luckily,I met you on internet,which made me have a confidence to write it down carefully.

但值得庆幸的是，我遇到了您，您让重新找回了对英语写作的信心。

And I will write a composition everydey until I enter a college.

从现在开始，我要每天都要写一篇英语作文直到我考上大学。

By the way ,I want to know what is your QQ number? I hope I could talk with you,Best wishes to you,not best wish to you.

另外，您可不可以告诉我您的QQ号？我希望能时刻得到您的指导。

Yours，

此致 敬礼

JooZone

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Firstly , thank you very much for your so great evaluation! Yeah , I know you are very working—hard, and I know how important it is for a senior student to enter into college. Thus , in my heart , although , I am not your real teacher, I must take every composition which is assigned to me as a very serious task besides other students’. So long as I do it like this, I dare to say myself : you can have a sound sleep.

And I think so that almost other teachers are like what I said just now so please communicate with your own teacher more about your puzzles and your feelings. After that I think the relation between you and your teacher will become more harmonious!

In the end , I also encourage you to practice more and think more . Please trust yourself that you are sure to success and enter into your ideal college ! At that moment, please let me look at your cheerful smile and hear your exciting cheers!