Mr. Guo点评：短短的几句描述，就把两只可爱活泼的小兔展现在我们面前。希望代昂同学能再接再励，写出更好的文章来。

My father
　 My father is forty-three years old. 好学英文网提供范文 He is a teacher. He works very hard. He always wears a yellow coat and a pair of blue trousers. He like doing sports and he likes basketball best.
　 My father loves me very much. He cheeks my homework every day. He often buys delicious food for me. On weekends we often go to the park with my mother. I love my father.

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