A letter to my pen pal

Dear Lei yun:

Hello! I am Tian jin hua. I live in wei yang hu garden. I am very happy to have a new pen pal like you.

I am a boy. I like listening to music very much . I have a happy family. My dad is an engineer. He likes working with numbers. My mum has no job. She is a kind mother. She does housework every day to keep our home clean.

I have a little brother. He is a lovely boy! You must like him at your first sight.

What about you? Is everything Ok? Can you tell me ?