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题目：My Ideal Husband（我的理想丈夫）
文华高中3年2班李佳玟

Although I'm only sixteen years old now, I already have a picture of my ideal husband in my mind.

I don't put much emphasis on his appearance because I don't agree with judging people by their appearances. I consider it more important to have a kind heart. I don't wish for a rich husband, but I hope that he will work hard and will be enthusiastic about what he does.

He doesn't need to have the same job as me, but I think that if we both have some similar interests that we both love, it will be easier to communicate with each other. This way, we can prevent ourselves from arguing over small things. Besides this, we should be patient with our children and take good care of them. hxw.red

My ideal husband should be my faithful companion during my journey through life; someone who will share his work, his pleasures, his misfortunes with me.

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