Dear Sir or Madam,
I received your invitation. It is really appreciative that I can get an interview opportunity of English teacher. To apply this position, I prepared some resources and met some questions. If you are kind enough could you tell me the answers?
Firstly, since I still have some classes, whether it can be a part-time job. Moreover, I organized resume in Chinese. Should I make an English one? Finally, because becoming an English teacher is my dream, if I do not reach your English teacher standard, could I get an assistant first?
Thanks for your time and I am looking forward to you.

Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,

I received your invitation. It is really appreciative that I can get an interview opportunity of English teacher. To apply this position, I prepared some resources and met some questions. If you are（这里是陈述语气，结尾用的问号） kind enough could you tell me the answers?

Firstly, since I still have some classes, whether it can be a part-time job. Moreover, I organized resume in Chinese. Should I make an English one?（这一句表达的不太好） Finally, because becoming an English teacher is my dream, if I do not reach your English teacher standard, could I get an assistant first? << Thanks for your time and I am looking forward to you.

Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

点评：7-8分

写的不错，目的明确，问题清楚。

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