齐天09考研英语作文深度分析及最佳范文

应 用 文

Part A: Letter
Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been very successful in some regions. “White Pollution” is still going on. Write a letter to the editor(s) of your local news paper to
1. Give your opinions briefly and
2. Make two or three suggestions. hxw.red
You should write about 100 words, do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address.

本年度的小作文——建议信可以说毫无新意。只要平时接受过系统训练，对付这样的文章可以说不费吹灰之力。关键是如何应用“一个中心，两个基本点”的法宝并牢记小作文的“六字诀”，基本上就不会出什么偏差。

应用文范文

Dear editors, ①
This letter is expected to find you in good mood!② As one of your faithful readers, I would like to ask for③ your attention to a serious problem – white pollution, which is due to④ the use of plastic bags.
Undoubtedly, there are many ways to solve the problem. First and foremost⑤, the majority of citizens⑥ should know that bad things may happen if we keep using plastic bags. In addition, government should do something to make people pay more money if they insist on making white pollutions. Last but not least, it should be started from everyone of us, especially the young scholars⑦.
Virtually having no other choices⑧, I write this letter to catch public attention. You just do not know how worried I am for not being able to stop the White Pollution! ⑨ (134 words)
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
① 格式按照课堂所说，完全够用。当然因为directions里面提到了editor，所以这里用sir稍逊，但是即使用了也无碍大局。
② 第一句非常讨巧，完全可以照搬点题班范文，不用非常可惜。
③ 第二句点题班的范文稍加改动就可以照搬。
④ Due to是用来代替because of的。
⑤ 形合词必须用。给大家的几十个挑出一个就行。
⑥ 替换most of us
⑦ 替换college students
⑧ 原文套用 hxw.red
⑨ 稍加改动点题班范文，就有一个非常好的结尾。
⑩ 为照顾后加入的学员，范文没有使用强化班所授强力句型；如能使用，效果倍增。

论 说 文
Part B: In your essay, you should
1. Describe the drawing briefly and
2. Explain its intended meaning, and then
3. Give your comments

09年大作文一如既往地避开了“第一热点”，考核了“第二热点”——网络和沟通；由此可见命题者的反押题倾向越发明显了。这说明我们一方面要运用测试学更加细致分析命题规律，另一方面要把更大的精力放在一些经过阅卷环节检验更为可靠的方法上。
今年跑题不会像07年那么普遍。很多同学看了网上的一些评论就担心是没有必要的。比如：写网络的利与弊，带上沟通就可以；写沟通的重要性，带上网络就行，诸如此类，正反均可，没越界就可以接受。除非你写人是社会属性的动物，大谈特谈现代人的孤独；或者如何戒掉网瘾，或者谈应该大力发展网络建设，或者谈代沟。即便这些同学，只要记住图画作文如何审题就可以有效避免悲剧。
从历年阅卷的经验来看，今年的尺度应该有所放宽，所以请同学们不急不躁，绝不轻易下结论。最好稍事休息就开始复试的准备，不获全胜，誓不罢休！

The Significance of Face to Face Communication

The last page of the exam paper found me in a great surprise when a spectacularly-designed cartoon heaved itself into my sight, which characterized an army of individuals are in a web, talking with each other on internet. It seems like they are close to one another; nevertheless, there is no doubt that they cannot even see other folks face to face.
My thought surged like tide after perceiving the deeper connotation of this picture. To start with, there is no denying that internet is getting to be exceedingly important nowadays, especially in this age of information and communication. Additionally, internet can do a lot of good to us only when it is used in the right way; nevertheless, some young scholars do not harbor the belief. Last but not least, I am seriously assured that the significance of face to face communication can never be overemphasized – countless facts justify my argument; a pervasive case in point is that most net worms may hardly have a successful life and career.
Based on the experience of successful characters, a growing number of citizens came to the conclusion that a healthy attitude toward internet should be developed and kept and the majority of people should pay more attention to face to face communication. Undoubtedly, this is a matter of happiness or suffering, no one could afford to ignore it. （227 words）

① 因为绝不出书，而且范文尤其是增补版的发布时机和范围经过了精心筛选，因此可以确保不会有大量重合的现象，这一点至关重要。从现有的情况来看，可以确信今年若干著名模板必然会重蹈历年来模板臭街的覆辙。
② 10词10句的威力可以说无往而不利，运用好了，可以应付几乎所有作文，这次考试就是明证。
③ 经过培训的同学只需掌握10词10句，自己能写几十个初中水平的单词，就可以得到相当不错的分数了。即使达不到范文的效果，也会比自己真实水平得分高得多。当然，圈内人都知道“和谐社会”一类的表述，实在是不用为好！hxw.red

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