这篇作文写的有点太通俗，不过好学英文网认为此文写的是作者内心最真实的感受，我们在欣赏文章的同时，更重要的是欣赏下作者对大学生活的感受，以此为鉴，为我们的大学生活指明一个方向。

Time passes by.I'm 24,nearing.After six years primary,three years middle school,three years high school,three years specialist and two years undergraduate,finally,I have finished my student career.It is a long time,during these years,I laughted,cried,cheered and suffered.It is full of variety feelings.And now,I should be independent,notonly on economies,but also on thoughts.

From our birth,we are rushing to death.Surprised?Think that,one day,you were old enough to go to the paradise.What can you take with?The answer is:NOTING!Should we give up our live for this reason?No,we should live as happy as we can.Or,your parents must be sad.They are not young already.They give us lives.We should cherish at least.Right?

Come on!Man!With our hands,we can live a happy life.

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