2011年6月英语四级作文预测
好学英文网导读:预测2011年6月英语四级作文是不可能的事,但是有些热点话题还是有必要让大家去了解,好学英文网总结了两个热点话题1、环保;2、食品问题;中国目前最热的问题就是这些。大家可以通过参考范文记忆一些好的句子,祝大家四级考试顺利。
热点话题1:环保
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Environmental Protection
环境保护
Today the quality of our natural environment has become an important issue. The world population is rising so quickly that the world has become too crowded. We are using up our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals. If we continue to do this, life on earth cannot survive.
现如今我们的自然环境已经成为一个重要问题。世界人口增长如此之快以至于世界已经变得过于拥挤。我们在消耗自然资源的同时危险化学物品污染着我们生存的环境。如果我们继续这样下去,地球上的生物将不能生存。
Concerned people have made some progress in environmental protection. Governments of many countries have established laws to protect the air, forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution.
相关人士在环境保护方面做出了一些进展。许多国家的政府已经建立法律来保护大气,森林和海洋资源以停止环境污染。
Still more measures should be taken to solve environmental problems. People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems, to use modern methods of birth control, to conserve(保存) our natural resources and recycle(再循环) our products. We are sure that we can have a better and cleaner place in the future.
同时更应该采取措施来解决环境问题。应该进一步教育人们认识到问题的重要性,应用现代的生产控制方法来节约我们的自然资源和实现产品的再循环。我们相信在将来我们会拥有一个更好的更干净的生存之地。
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热点话题二:食品问题
参考好学英文网范文如下:
From hxw.red's Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Food Poisoning Accident. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
你的几个同学因食用了从某超市买回的食品而中毒,幸亏及时治疗而脱险。请描述他(们)中毒与脱险的过程,并呼吁要加强食品安全。
A Food Poisoning Accident ________
行文思路
本题属于情景式命题。提纲要求描述一件事情的经过,由此可判断本文应为记叙文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:交待食物中毒的背景和原因;叙述中毒的和脱险的经过;谈谈由此引发的感想,呼吁加强食品安全。
参考高分范文
A Food Poisoning Accident
Last month, I [1]witnessed a food poisoning accident [2]happening to my classmates. At that time the situation was really very dangerous and urgent. Though finally they got out of danger, this accident [3]is still vivid in my mind.
That day was Julie’s birthday, one of my classmates. In order to celebrate it, her roommates bought a big birthday cake for her from a supermarket nearby. They shared the cake happily. [4]However, after a while, all of them felt abdominal pain, nausea and dizziness. Two of them even cannot stand up because of great pain. We [5]rushed to send them to the hospital. [6]It turned out that the cake they ate had expired its guarantee period. Futunately, [7]due to timely treatment, they all recovered very soon.
[4]However, this accident [8]leaves me a deep ponder. I think it is very urgent to take effective measures to improve food safety. [4]Firstly, the government should [9]strengthen supervision and administration on food safety. [4]More importantly, to those who immoral businessmen, more strict punishment should be given. [4]Besides, we consumers should be more careful in buying food. [10]Only in this way can we make sure that no same accident happens.
【亮点点评】
[1]“目睹,目击”。
[2]“发生在某人身上”,现在分词短语作定语。
[3]“仍然令我记忆犹新”。
[4]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[5]“闻讯赶来”。
[6]“结果是,原来是”。
[7]“由于及时的治疗”。
[8]“留给我深深的思考”。
[9]“加强监管”。
[10]“only+状语”位于句首,引起句子部分倒装。
佳句临摩
1.佳句:Though finally they got out of danger, this accident is still vivid in my mind.
临摩:尽管这件事情已经过去了很多,但它仍然让我记忆犹新。
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2.佳句:It turned out that the cake they ate had expired its guarantee period.
临摩:结果他没能在红灯前通过那个路口,而和另外一辆车撞在了一起。
_____.
3.佳句:It is very urgent to take effective measures to improve food safety.
临摩:现在的当务之急是帮助大学生树立一个正确的就业观。
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【KEY】
1. Though this incident happened a long time ago, it is still vivid in my mind.
2. It turned out that his car could not pass through the crossroad before the light turned red and crashed into another car.
3. It is very urgent to help college students form a right idea on employment.
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