2009年6月四级英语作文预测及范文(九)

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摘要：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands. You…

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)现在很多大学生都喜欢追求名牌

2)产生这种现象的原因是什么

3)你如何看待这一现象

Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands

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行文思路

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述目前热衷于大学生追求名牌的现象;分析大学生热衷名牌的原因;阐述“我”对大学生追求名牌的看法并提出建议。

高分范文

Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands

Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands. [2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.

[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands. [2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students. [2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.

[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. [3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.

【亮点点评】

[1]“有…倾向”。

[2]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、意义连贯。

[3] follow表示“跟随，追求(趋势或时尚)”

[4]用于引出原因。

[5]which引导非限制性定语从句。

[6] it为形式主语，不定式为真正主语。

[7]“远远超出他们的消费能力”。beyond表示“超出…范围”。

[8]强调句型，此处是强调主语。not…but连接并列成分。

[9]“而不是”。

佳句临摹

1. 佳句：It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.